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Sunday, 4 July 2021

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 Once Upon a time around summer at 3:56pm on the news there was a message at a little town that was on the news said there was a huge flood heading their way and they must effectuate immediately before it arrives at the city. The maximum time they had was 3 hours and the town packed all their stuff and left immediately but there was huge traffic and they didn't have enough time to leave. so they will probably not have enough time to leave the city before the flood arrives so they beg and pray for them to safely leave this city. and they hoped their family would leave the city as well but after they were done there praying and begging the clouds started to shine and there were sounds of 7 trumpets from up in the sky. a cloud staircase appeared out of nowhere and people were yelling jesus is here our savior there was a man called jesus with a staff and walked down the stairs and blessed his children but the time was 6:47pm and the flood will be here soon jesus said don't worry my children i will save you so he summoned a long force too block the flood and they can leave safely lots of people were yelling thank you jesus but after they all were done they could see the flood and it was heading right to them and they were still scared it arrived at the city and destroyed the city into pieces and the people were very sad that there homes were gone but the flood just went right over the people because of jesus force and they carried on.


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Devante,
    Thanks for sharing your story - you have included lots of interesting details to keep us reading until the very end! People had 3 hours to leave the city, a cloud staircase apppeared as well as Jesus telling people he would keep them safe. Keep up the awesome writing skills!
    Stay well, stay safe Devante - take care, Ms. Tapuke

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